Friday, September 07, 2007

Professional Journalism

Do professional news outlets, in a major market mind you, not hire or utilize editors anymore? What's wrong with the second sentence:
A Clayton County Sheriff's deputy is recovering following a crash about 1 a.m. Friday on Tara Boulevard.

The deputy's cruiser apparently blew a tire, causing it to blow a tire and flip into a ditch.

The deputy was not seriously injured but was taken to Atlanta Medical Center to be checked out as a precaution.
*Sigh* 'Course, maybe it blew two tires. . .

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